You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mr. Sam,
I hope you and your family are all well! I`m writing to inform you about the party where I will organize at number 27 flat on the second floor where I have recently moved into.
My name is Ayoub, and I have been a resident at the same building with you over two weeks, and I hope to be friends not only neighbors. When I decided to arrange a celebration party, I could assume that it may create some noise to you. Therefore, I would like to share with you some information about it to avoid any inconvenience might occur.
My wife and I will organize in celebration of our wedding anniversary in the week end on Sunday at 10 PM. The party is arranged for our celebration of our fifth wedding anniversary which is due next Sunday. We arranged a DJ to play some musical songs, but we assure you that we will not raise the sound too much. Few of our closest friends will come with their families to celebrate with us this special moment, but we requested them not to bring their kids to control the party.
Why do not you join us the party? It would be our pleasure to get closer with you and your family as a friend. You can come any time suits you after 10 PM.
Seeing you,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31304347826 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29705161561 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591304347826 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8948895179 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6666666667 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183364709745 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725772587563 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560519637513 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129171670536 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674499327626 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.