You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbor to come
HI Jack,
Hope this letter finds you hale and hearty; this is Sam, your new neighbor. We had shifted here 3 days ago and our house is exactly opposite to yours. You must have seen us unloading our luggage. By profession I am a doctor and my wife works in a telecommunication company as a project coordinator. Since we are new here, so in order to introduce ourselves with people here; we are planning a house warming party coming Thursday on 20th November. You are invited with your whole family; we will be eagerly looking forward to your kind presence. I and my wife are quite fond of music and we have decided to call a DJ who will play mix of Rock and Jazz that will entertain everyone in the party.Along side there will be kids show to entertain that age group too.However, I am afraid that noise will create disturbance in surroundings as almost 30 people are expected to attend; apologies for that in advance.
Thank you for your kind consideration and we are expecting your presence at the party.
Yours Truly,
Sam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
HI Jack, Hope this letter finds you hale and hear...
^^^
Line 2, column 694, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Along
...at will entertain everyone in the party.Along side there will be kids show to enterta...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 694, Rule ID: ALONG_SIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'alongside'?
Suggestion: Alongside
...at will entertain everyone in the party.Along side there will be kids show to entertain th...
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Line 2, column 761, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...ds show to entertain that age group too.However, I am afraid that noise will create dis...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 908, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... attend; apologies for that in advance. Thank you for your kind consideration an...
^^^^
Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur presence at the party. Yours Truly, Sam
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56756756757 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69555812424 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659459459459 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.1638970422 44.8134815571 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 93.8888888889 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29418268902 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13372909402 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113804637186 0.0603063233224 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269221819838 0.12726935374 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536749541255 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.