Some people think that children should go to kindergarten before attending primary school, while others believe that is better for children to stay all day with their families. Discuss both views and give yoir own opinion.
There is no gainsaying that the topic” kids initial grooming at school or at home” grabs the immediate attention owing to its uniqueness. One group asserts that it is important for children to attend kindergarten before school, whereas other group is of the opinion that it’s the best time that kids can enjoy with their families. In my opinion, before attending primary school, it is quite beneficial for kids to attend playgroup. Let’s discuss both perspectives in detail so reach a conclusive agreement.
In running days, kids require more grooming and basic leanings before joining stage 1. Nowadays, almost at every school children gets admission after a lengthy written or oral test. It’s quite hard to manage their expectations if the child has not prepared well. With respect to academic learning, it is pretty essential to put your child in a playgroup, so that the kids learn the basics and prepares for admission test. Apart from exam, it is beneficial from behavioral perspective as well. These classes are actually ice breaking sessions for many students; they learn to mingle up with other people, adapt sharing habit, group discussions help them open up and increases confidence.
On the contrary, there is no denial that kids initial learning starts at home. No one can teach better but the family itself. It helps children to spend quality time with family, learn basic manners and etiquettes. The childhood memories are always one to cherish. Few decades back, there was no concept of kindergarten or daycares, every child was taught core manners from their grandparents.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, in today’s world it is now obligatory to put your child in daycare before joining school in order to make him compete with other student academically and socially. Today’s learning procedures are entirely changed as compared to previous times resulting in everyday increasing business for kindergarten owners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'iced'.
Suggestion: iced
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asing business for kindergarten owners.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, well, whereas, apart from, in my opinion, on the contrary, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36538461538 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84536689282 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6544710023 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4705882353 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.70588235294 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216982793885 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655094702661 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711409032342 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129651133129 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707236070884 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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