Dear Ms Oswell,
I am your next door neighbour and we have recently moved into this house. I regret that I did not get thr opportunity to be acquainted with you. Infact, we area family of three - me, my husband and our 7 year old son. We are planning to hold a party next Sunday and would like to invite you.
My son's birthday will be on next Sunday. Hence, my spouse and I have decided to celebrate this special occasion and invite some friends and relatives. The party will commence at 7 pm and continue till midnight. It will consist of some music and dancing in which a local music band will perform. The dinner will be served at around 8 pm in the garden and the concert will be held afterwards.
Although, the participants are comparativeli limited, we are afraid that the noise from the music performance might disturb you. We apologize in advance for any inconvenience created by this.
I initially intended to invite you and your family to the party over the phone, bht I hesitated whether it could be a good idea or not. My husband suggested that it would be more appropriate if I write a letter to do so.
We will be genuinely pleased if you kindly accept our invitation to our beloved son's birthday ceremony. This way, we will not only find the chance to become familiar but also enjoy the occasion together.
Best regards
Chhavi.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ms Oswell, I am your new neighbor, shifted in apart...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20833333333 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07203569373 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684523809524 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4281015012 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275336414516 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113857677356 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917102923681 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123236647503 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080302931375 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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