Dear Mr. and Mrs. Smith,
Hope this letter finds you well. My name is Tony, your new neighbour. I am writing to show my apology that I will hold a party this Saturday night which may be kind of noisy. However, It will be my great honor if you can paticipate in the party.
One week ago, my family moved here. I planned to make a party to serve my friends and neighbours like you. The children can play at backyard where we built a new swing. The adults will enjoy BBQ at garden. During the party, with my apology, we will play jazz and blue music because Wendy's friends like these genres. Thus the loud music may disturb you and your family as my concern.
In this case, I truely would like you can join our party, thus we can get to know each other well. Also, we can enjoy some liquors in my living room if you are not in favor of these music.
Once again, I want to apologize to you for the disturbance. I am waiting for your reply.
Sincerely,
Tony
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...cause Wendys friends like these genres. Thus the loud music may disturb you and your...
^^^^
Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this music' or 'these musics'?
Suggestion: this music; these musics
... living room if you are not in favor of these music. Once again, I want to apologize to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, thus, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.24324324324 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0456156683 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627027027027 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2980374769 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.3333333333 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205203498 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731784897539 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748180233351 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110430275719 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770094623489 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.7 8.37731958763 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.42 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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