You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your lettercorrect the information in the articleexplain why it is import

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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.

Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter

correct the information in the article

explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information

suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing with response to your recent article about our town karaikudi that published on October 21st with wrong details on your magazine Daily Mirror.

My hometown is well known and popular among school students for education system. There are 3 government aided engineering universities and 4 arts colleges whereas it is mentioned just two in your news story. Additionally, it is said that illiterate percentage is high due to unawareness among rural population which is completely incorrect. People trust news publications, it is main source of information sharing and conveying the message to the public. Furthermore, by giving the inappropriate details and this will get register in peoples mind. There is a high possibility to lose the reputation of our town by spreading the false details on public media. To resolve this issue, I am requesting on behalf of our community to republish the article with the correct details. Moreover, it would be appreciated if a apologize conveyed to our people on this issue.

I look forward for your response on this matter.

Yours faithfully,

Sreenivasan

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 815, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s. Moreover, it would be appreciated if a apologize conveyed to our people on thi...
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Line 5, column 815, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s. Moreover, it would be appreciated if a apologize conveyed to our people on this issue. ...
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Line 5, column 865, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e conveyed to our people on this issue. I look forward for your response on this...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29444444444 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01679966967 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6999901353 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6363636364 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149267484892 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517815310024 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466654178699 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103396100952 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040912929159 0.0580467560999 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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