You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a familyfor six months and look after their six- year-old child.Write a letter to the parents. In your letter- Explain why you would like the job- give details of why you wo

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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family

for six months and look after their six- year-old child.

Write a letter to the parents. In your letter

- Explain why you would like the job

- give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ

- say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing with regard to express my interest to live with your family for six months in Australia and willing to look after your six-year-old kid.

My Name is Sreenivasan Murugappan and I came to know about this job through the advertisement published in Daily Mirror. I liked this job because it is not easy whereas it is my passion for last few years to encourage and entertain children. I have best qualities like patience, determination and very much committed to work. These are the basic traits required for person to look after a kid. I have worked as a teacher in kinder garden for last three years. Moreover, occasionally volunteered in day care and received multiple awards for my work. My experience completely suits the job requirements. I planned to do short time course on parenting and planned to offer free counselling on children education during the leisure time.

I look forward for your response on this matter.

Yours faithfully,

Sreenivasan

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
... to encourage and entertain children. I have best qualities like patience, determination ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, whereas, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04242424242 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91107255738 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660606060606 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6307335451 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6363636364 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190807412752 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652444615714 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059840018222 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148197551307 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748534051369 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.