The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not work

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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:
– Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
– Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
– Suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir/Madam,
My Name is SreenivasanM and I am writing this letter on behalf of residents of Golden Park Apartment to complain the rubbish collection system that is not working properly.
First of all, I would like to appreciate the effort put by cleaning staffs to keep our area neat and clean. However, for last one week due to their absence in work, garbage bins are overflowing and its spreads bad odor smell.
Rubbish bins are located near to garden/play area and there are chances for health-related issues. One of our neighbor’s kid hospitalized due to malaria infection which caused by mosquito.
Council have to hiker more cleaning staffs to overcome this problem. By this way they can visit our apartment in daily basis to clear the wastage. Please take it in high priority since it has been reported several times, but no actions taken yet.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Yours faithfully,
SreenivasanM

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04487179487 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76735305523 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.74358974359 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1080346061 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4444444444 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262680001991 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794427562156 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747776783488 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108423027092 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899646581236 0.0580467560999 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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