In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Old people in Britain lives in an old age home since nurses are there to look after them. Occasionally the government is paying their expenses. In my opinion, family should take care of their older parents. This essay will discuss why family should pay their parents expenses instead of the government. Following this, a reasoned conclusion will be shared.
First and foremost, children should take care of their parents basic needs. They are the one who can truly show their love and affections to their parents in hard situations. Furthermore, this is the time to payback what they got from their parents in their childhood. Mentally this will make older people stronger and healthier in the last phase of their life. Since they are far away from home, at least paying their expenses and visiting them will make them happy and proud.
On the other hand, many people say that young people in this generation have not thought that one day they will also become older and must stay in homes without any support from their children if this culture continues. Furthermore, they did not realize that how their parents would feel because government can fulfill only certain needs. Secondly, this has become a trend in many countries especially in Britain. To prove that Standford University had done many surveys on old people living in homes and the result shows that 70% people moved away from their homes because of being isolated, also due to no helping hands in emergency health situations. On these circumstances the government should pay for their senior citizens.
To sum up, family should take responsibility to pay their parents bill. At the same time for some old people who are alone then the government should support
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, at least, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98281786942 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40216263572 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54295532646 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.3784981871 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2941176471 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318899440167 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120011556928 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699204361445 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23529216145 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800583240574 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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