In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, elderly send to old age home where they live their remaining life in loneliness and sadly.it very shameful for current generation. However a person came to old age home, they have to some expensies for them care, and sometime they can arrange by donation. As per my point of view the family of the old person has to pay for the person's care. The reasons for this are explained in trailed paragraphs.
Firstly, when because of generation gap family send old person to old age home to reduce tension in family. Somehow it is their responsibility that total expanse at the old age home should be provided by family because during the whole life a old person had done his all responsibility perfectly and it is also duty of family to take care of that person but because of some reason a person have to live in old age home then family is responsible for pay of person's care. As another reason to pay for person care is the person who is at old age home is a member of the family and that person has done many thing for the family. To cite an example, a person made the their children educated and also pay for them care during sickness or illness of any family member.
Secondly, government is also trying to help the old age homes with free medical services and with low cost of medicine. Government has many other responsibilities where it can not get extra money to pay for elderly care. Moreover government also pay them pension is a type of financial help to old person.
To conclude, above paragraphs show that the old person who go to old age home is a family member of them and it is responsibility that they should pay for person's care.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...mily. To cite an example, a person made the their children educated and also pay for them...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...et extra money to pay for elderly care. Moreover government also pay them pension is a t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51485148515 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49544237045 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438943894389 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.4932882883 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38992204266 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192073643743 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607775035204 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298477370268 0.151304729494 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308776648267 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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