In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Old age life and care is a major concern across countries. In few places when someone in the family becomes old they are kept in old age homes where the government have to sometimes pay for their living. It is undoubtedly a question to the society whether the family or the government should pay for their care. In this essay I shall give my vantage point before concluding.
I strongly feel that during old age our near and dear ones need utmost care and concern. Many families today consider them to be a burden and hence boycott them from the family at the hands of old age homes. These elderly and old people have spent maximum time in the family raising their kids and providing for the family needs during their young age hence it certainly becomes the families responsibility to pay for their care even while at old age homes. The governing bodies pays for the maintenance of old age homes, give salaries to the nurses there etc. That should be the only involvement of the government. On the other hand, there are families who are not financially stable, are out of the house most of the time due to their work or someone who is single and does not have anyone to look after his/her parent should be the responsibility of the government solely. After all the old people might also have worked hard and paid taxes to the government during their young age. It is absolutely fine now if the government have to bear the costs of old people.
To conclude taking care of the old and paying for their needs is the first and foremost duty of the family later it can be looked upon by the government. But irrespective old people have to be cared by either and cannot be just dumped to fine their ways and means on their own.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 384, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'families'' or 'family's'?
Suggestion: families'; family's
...oung age hence it certainly becomes the families responsibility to pay for their care ev...
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Line 3, column 480, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'pay'.
Suggestion: pay
... at old age homes. The governing bodies pays for the maintenance of old age homes, g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, so, while, after all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48417721519 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33580106 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1268754147 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39181647101 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153120821345 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08669911335 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296626951709 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900722634562 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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