The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The qualities and skills that is needed to reach the peak of success cannot be acquired merely from any university or other academic institutions. Colleges and universities are undoubtedly essential which paves a path for an individual to enhance knowledge but it does not focus on the skills & talents of the individual. I am going to shed some light on the aforementioned aspect and give my vantage point agreeing with the latter.
The education obtained at a university or college certainly distinguishes an individual from the crowd like doctors, pilots, architects, accountants, engineers etc. This sector obviously requires degree & further education to make their mark in the field they choose. Without in-depth knowledge these professionals will not be in a position to do justice to their jobs. The more they study the easier it is for them to reach at a certain level in their lives. However, on the contrary there are many college drop outs today who have become big shots just by focusing on their inner skills and qualities and developing it. The prime example would be of Bill Gates who owns the biggest company Microsoft Corporation and is known to be the wealthiest documented individual in the world. His keen interest in computer programming made him reach the pinnacle of success and not just studies. Citing another example would be Steve jobs who owns Apple and was a college dropout. It is amazing to think how he became a technology genius. It was possible only by paying close attention to their innate qualities & their hard work.
To sum up even though education and degrees are phenomenally important but cannot be the only factor for success. Lot depends on the direction an individual is growing attributing to his or her skills and talents.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00677966102 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81522025233 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620338983051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0733848562 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.93333333333 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220387827269 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631963778546 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692403165042 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145014487489 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505118755606 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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