You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Dear Guru,
I am writing this letter to express my interest to work in our head office for six months which is located in Florida USA.
Let me explain in more detail. I have been part of this organization for the last five years and consistently appreciated by client for my work. We have a critical project delivery for the next six months, our team have completed the development work. Next phase would be deployment, continuous testing and project release plan. During this time, we need to work with the customer very closely. As per the client ask and invite, I would like to visit our head office till the project release. By this way, I would be meeting the client in our head office. This would help us in delivering the project in time and a bug-free product. During this time, I would recommend Bheemiah to lead the offshore team. Also, I will coördinate from our head office. I request you to start the transition process. Please get the client invite letter, book flight tickets and take care of the accommodation during my visit.
Looking forward to hearing from you
Yours Sincerely,
SreenivasanM
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77319587629 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54630827527 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603092783505 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4846002075 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.1428571429 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8571428571 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24145262789 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07323517124 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566518730314 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154895544235 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849596412047 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.