You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use
for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
• describe the problem with the equipment
• explain how this problem is affecting your work
• say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the defective internet modem which supplied by your company on September 2019.
One of my apartment neighbor suggested your company for internet connection. I have applied and paid the subscription fees through online, next day installation completed. Broadband was working fine for first few weeks, later internet speed started dropping and, in few days, completely lost the connection. Issue is due to faulty plug point in the modem box. I’m working as a software engineer in IT industry, internet is vital data source for our work. One week in a month, I’m supposed to work on US timings. On these days I will be connecting from home. I started receiving couple of escalation from office because of disconnection issues. To solve fix the issue, I ask you to replace a new device rather repairing the existing one. Secondly, I need waiver or cash back for the internet disconnected days.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Regards,
Sreenivas
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1369047619 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75470505559 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.732142857143 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9198416814 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9166666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122464470387 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369798553851 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436209619769 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10322740744 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528273303653 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.