Some People Say That It Is Important To Keep Home And Workplace Tidy

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Some People Say That It Is Important To Keep Home And Workplace Tidy

Several people believe that it is vital to keep our office space and living area neat and clean. Addition to that many folks felt organizing the household things and office materials in the right place also key an essential habit. I strongly agree on this statement and this essay will discuss my opinion by providing convincing examples.

To begin with, keeping our home tidy and placing the products in the correct place is important because this is one form indirectly that will show our responsibilities and characters to the guests who visits the house. Also, it is must to keep home clean if toddler or infant is around since this is stage, they pick anything and will do the biting. For instance, one of our neighbor kid’s swallowed waste paper which is lying in the kids play area. It happened because of human error and this could have avoided if it thrown into dustbins. Not only tidy, being organized in living area also significant.

Secondly, it is important to value office space because this the locations where foreign investors and clients meets to build the business. End of the day a place which gives a beautiful life to millions of people by giving compensations. For example, although my office space is tidy and well organized, extra care usually be taken at the time of customer’s visits. This gives the confidence to our financial supporters. Widely it is acknowledged by many successful entrepreneurs that success comes by maintaining a pleasant environment.

To conclude, it is important to keep tidy in home as well as office since these are the two places where most of the time being spent.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...uests who visits the house. Also, it is must to keep home clean if toddler or infant is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92779783394 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73090793989 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0496453361 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166337044309 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523902029807 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679375017681 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117597380574 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642200526714 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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