Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult.
Does modern technology reduce or increase stress?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Electronic devices such as washing machine, refrigerator and computer software’s based on the internet made our lives easier compare to the old days. Whereas, several people believe that these household devices made more complicated. In my view, modern technology absolutely reduced stress and made our life easier. This essay will discuss how the latest technology reduced stress with convincing examples.
Firstly, the development of new technology reduced pressure and tension in various ways. Getting labour for work with a moderate price is very difficult these days, particularly in cities. Most of the electronic goods are fully automatic, by scheduling the timer machine will start and stop. Physical presence is not required, many working parents will set the timer and go to work. It saves time and less expensive, also manage to complete domestic work. To prove that, Anna university had done many surveys on electronic devices usage and the results show 90% of people at least use one labour-saving device in their home.
Secondly, recent progress in software’s and technology made people connect easier regardless of any geographical locations. This not the same a decade ago since people used to call using Landline with high outgoing rates. Due to the latest innovation of user-friendly internet-based applications people can connect any part of the world. For instance, thousands of people got stuck in flood during 2016 storm. People posted their locations in social network sites and rescue team able to reach them using maps which saved thousands of lives.
To conclude, the adaption of modern technology is the boom for the present world. By using stable devices and correct software’s will lead a prosperous life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r lives easier compare to the old days. Whereas, several people believe that these hous...
Line 3, column 524, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'devices'' or 'device's'?
Suggestion: devices'; device's
...ity had done many surveys on electronic devices usage and the results show 90% of peopl...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, at least, for instance, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42700729927 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85301800884 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649635036496 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.494447379 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.4705882353 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88235294118 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24259444931 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698276103725 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055528503073 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139890245438 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817420738298 0.056905535591 144% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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