Write about the following topic:
Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult.
Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this modern era, innovative machines like dishwashers and computers have started to control human lives. Some people think that these technological advancement make human lives easier and stress-free while others believe that these devices is a boon. I strongly believe that depending on machines does reduces our stress levels and makes us much happier.
Following are some reasons why I think modern technology reduces stress. Primary reason is that doing work with the help of machines saves time and energy. Nowadays most people are leading a hectic and busy schedule and finding time to do all the work becomes difficult. For instance working women's finds devices like washing machines and other household appliances a life saver as it does most of the job. Hence they can get enough time to relax and spend quality time with their near and dear ones. Secondly, machines are more efficient than manual labour. Activities which take hours by human labour will take only a few minutes to be completed by machines .For example, in a restaurant , dishwashers does the job of cleaning the dishes rather than manually cleaning it. Another reason which adds to reducing stress of mankind is that machines are cost-effective. Taking previous example, employing labours to do the same job requires efficient training and a basic pay . While using devices , the amount can be saved and utilized for other purposes.
Lastly I would like to conclude by stating that modern technology and innovations is definitely a stress buster for people making their lives peaceful and happier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1327.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18359375 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57109810392 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7728884174 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226620401662 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770897593899 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627833889441 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164672763421 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478887314996 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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