You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:• Explain when and how long you will be in town.• Ask whether you can stay at their home.• Offer to pay for yourself.

Essay topics:

You are planning a short visit to a city where one of your relatives lives.
Write a letter to your relative. In your letter:
• Explain when and how long you will be in town.
• Ask whether you can stay at their home.
• Offer to pay for yourself.

Dear Karthik,
I am writing this letter to let you know that I am travelling to Chennai on a business trip from my organization.
Let me explain in detail. I will be staying in Chennai for a month due to business meetings with clients who are going to visit Chennai office from the USA and for project delivery. My company will offer accommodation for my stay from Aug 14th to Sep 12th, 2019, but I will like to stay in your home. By this way, we will get some time to talk and hang around nearby attractions. Its been a long time since we met a couple of years ago, I feel this would be the right opportunities for us to recall our childhood memories. Also, I would like to pay including food and other household expenses during my stay. Please talk to your parents let me know your decision.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon
Regards,
Sreenivas

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
Suggestion: would
... from Aug 14th to Sep 12th, 2019, but I will like to stay in your home. By this way,...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, i feel, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43396226415 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51106486938 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654088050314 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5585263347 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229692212242 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829150171852 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494628479853 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129765419328 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479563973878 0.0580467560999 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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