You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am Mr. Jake Amdirson, I have been a client at your bank for almost 10 years. I have recently received my statement, as I requested it to be mailed to my home address. I am writing to you today as I am surprised to find a list of purchases that I didn’t commit.
I was out of town on the dates listed when the purchases were bought. I have a train ticket as an evidence of that. There are about ten items shown on the statement report, none of which I bought.
I would so much appreciate it if you can investigate in this case and deposit the money back to my account. I would also like to have a new card number issued as this incident reveals that someone might have memorized it and is using it in my name. The card number I have now in hand is
588895874563.
Your prompt reply is highly appreciated as this is a critical matter.
Your Sincerely,
Mr. Jake Amdirson.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lient at your bank for almost 10 years. I have recently received my statement, as...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ted it to be mailed to my home address. I am writing to you today as I am surpris...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...purchases that I didn't commit. I was out of town on the dates listed whe...
^
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... listed when the purchases were bought. I have a train ticket as an evidence of t...
^
Line 7, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. The card number I have now in hand is 588895874563. Your prompt reply is hi...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33707865169 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57499557217 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9359386215 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.3333333333 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247631495684 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761273025312 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409649496946 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118726990865 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811650070698 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.3 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.