Dear Ms. Sanjevani,
I, Divya, am writing this letter to express my strong dissatisfaction with hiring your agency for my first International trip to Ontario with my family. I had planned a trip for four weeks, and you informed me before-hand that everything is fixed, and that we would enjoy our trip. Unfortunately, the trip was disheartening to me and my family members.
In detail, we went to Ontario in the month of February as suggested by you. You have planned our four-week schedule, and also booked a five-star hotel, Holiday Inn. I was pleased to see the arrangements, and the scrumptious foods served by the hotel until I came to know that we had to pay the dinner prices, for which I was upset. Moreover, as per you, we had a private driver for our trip, but he did not turn up, which gave a bigger shock to me.
Now that we have returned back to India, I would demand you to pay back at least 40% of the price which I paid to you before my trip or else book a national trip to my family without any charges. If you do not respond to my mails, I may go further to complain to the police about your agency.
I look forward to a swift response.
Yours faithfully,
Divya Reddy
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
Dear Ms. Sanjevani, I, Divya, am writing this letter to express my stron...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returned'.
Suggestion: returned
...igger shock to me. Now that we have returned back to India, I would demand you to pay bac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42792792793 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63405691347 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617117117117 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5341290091 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3636363636 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260541453707 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951789412346 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058785405448 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129252103043 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783262612062 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.