Dear Mr and Mrs Brown,
How have you been? Hoping you are doing well. I have safely reached home last Tuesday.
I would like to ask you a favour which is to return a small bag that is in my room. My laptop and charger are in the small bag. The laptop is utterly important for my research, all of my works are saved on my laptop. I will have a great appreciate it if you can go through the trouble of sending me the bag with its contents through a courier.
The weight of the bag is approximately three kilograms, I would like to bear the cost of the courier. If the shipping does not support cash on delivery, please kindly provide me with your bank details as I will deposit the amount into your account in advance.
Thank you for your help and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best Regards,
Chris Wong
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29113924051 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23373789922 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626582278481 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8061330668 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.6363636364 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274013055443 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102606923583 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812481602294 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137330614103 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941470653225 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.