Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing a letter to request information about the historical exhibition in your town. I am administering a group of students to visit your town next month and this is a part of school activities to encourage young students to participate in the social survey and grow their interest in history. I would really appreciate it if you could forward me some information regarding the exhibition.
First of all, when will the historical exhibit be held, as well as the detail of opening time. Secondly, could you provide me more detail about the historical exhibition, for example, theme, exhibited objects on display. It will be more helpful to let students have a sense before we go.
In addition, would it be possible for us to get a discount on group booking or a student discount? If so, please notify me of the discount we are eligible for. I would be highly obliged if you could provide these details at your earliest.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Chris Wong
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...vey and grow their interest in history. I would really appreciate it if you could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82584269663 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77023263735 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2195622425 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0909090909 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 5.23603664747 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267528513677 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880541876525 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677497093968 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144110672801 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102541112725 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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