Dear Amber,
I hope you are doing well in the holiday season. You have asked me for my advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university, and I will try to make some useful suggestions.
You must keep in mind that university training is a preparation for your future career. Therefore, your first consideration should be to study a subject which will best equip you to earn a living. There is no doubt that the computer offers far wider job opportunities than history.
Besides, we are now in the age of the high-technology revolution. For the foreseeable future, not only will it be necessary for everyone to be computer-literate, it will also be necessary for them to be equipped with computer skills merely to earn a living. I am afraid only has a few careers offers in History.
I would recommend that you keep your reading of history in your spare time and prepare yourself for a worthwhile career in computers.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
- People in all modern societies use drugs but today s youth are expertimenting with both legal and illegal drugs and at an increasingly early age Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example Discuss the cause 61
- You have seen an advertisement for part time work in a hotel for three months over the summer Write a letter to the manager In your letter Say what experience you have Ask what the work involves Enquire about conditions 87
- You find that your study load is too heavy Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund 64
- You live in a room in a college where you share it with another student You find it very difficult to study and work there because your roommate always has friends visiting He she has parties in the room and sometimes borrows your things without asking yo 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, so, therefore, well, while, no doubt, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89349112426 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97281781155 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639053254438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6686757576 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160038222521 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603308540106 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477237060788 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103605863233 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061421090597 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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