You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
thank you friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions of how to send it back for you
Dear Peiwen,
I’m just writing to thank you for the amazing holiday. I’ve had a marvelous trip with you and our trip brings back a lot of fresh memories, as if it were yesterday. I really appreciate that you invited me to visit your splendid city.
A funny thing happened to me after I got home. I was unpacking my luggage and found out that my wallet isn’t in my backpack. I double checked the other bags, but couldn’t find it. Probably, I left the wallet in your house. You know me, I’ve always been forgetful.
I will be very grateful If you send it by post. Of course the expenses are on me. I’ve checked that the fastest ways is. to use EMS service and their office is just 100 metres away from your house. I hope that it won’t cause you any trouble.
I’m looking forward to our next holiday.
Keep in touch,
Alex
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Peiwen, I'm just writing to thank you for t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64102564103 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47150094007 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698717948718 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6111083811 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.2666666667 76.5299724578 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.4 16.8248392259 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313980907441 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977452376807 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884901788503 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180986098972 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101102480683 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.15 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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