It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that living in a city is more beneficial, while there are others who think that is it advantageous to live in the countryside. In my opinion, I believe that it depends on people’s needs and future plans.
On the one hand, many think that it is better to live in a big, developed city, where it is easier to find a job and build a career or to spend leisure time with varieties activities. Firstly, living in a city can have a positive impact on people who are active and like to feel the rhythm of rapid expanding cities. Secondly, there are more educational opportunities and job offers in a city compared to the countryside. In recent years, cities have become more attractive for people from the countryside because of the options from which they can choose the way of building their future. In spite of the fact that living cost is higher people from non-urban areas want to move to a city.
On the other hand, living in the countryside might be beneficial for those who enjoy having a slow pace of life and cannot stand crowds and noise. Nowadays, governments in many countries have released programs that support people who live in the countryside or consider moving there. For instance, for those who want to launch a business outside of a city, can get a loan with a very low interest rate, which is very beneficial considering the fact that in general the interest rate is very high. Another benefit of living in the countryside is a positive effect on people’s health. Living in areas surrounded by nature can reduce stress and make a good impact on your mood.
Finally, in my opinion, whether living in a city or in the countryside, depends on the future plans and goals, which people want to achieve in their lives.
In conclusion, having the experience of living in a city and in the countryside, can assist people to make a decision of their future plans. Both sides can be suitable for different people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67146974063 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6883175285 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472622478386 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8186561238 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.066666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221976875339 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795073631519 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610742727748 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144321788586 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670947486801 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.