You have planned to study in Australia. You have sent a letter to a college, but you have not received a reply from the college. Write a letter to the college principal. In your letter,
- you should give details of the course that you wished to do,
- say why do you choose to study at the college,
- say why you need the reply soon.
Dear Sir,
It is very kind of you to provide the facility for foreign students by letting them have a chance to study at your college. I am Shamema Afroj Sharna, one of the fortunate students from Bangladesh who could fulfill all the requirements asked for applying to your college. However, I did not get any reply from the college after completing the application procedure.
I completed my B. Sc. in Pathology in Bangladesh from the University of Dhaka, one of the most reputed public universities in Bangladesh. Now I am looking forward to having a Master's Degree in Microbiology as it will give me more specialization in choosing a working area in Medical Science.
Your college offers a myriad of facilities for research works. When I searched for activities that are to be done in addition to the academic courses, I was amused to see the abundance of practical field works done by the students.
I am very much fascinated to build my career in the research field. This is the main reason for choosing your college as you are the pioneer for producing scintillating researchers. Besides, you have the laboratory well-equipped with all the types of machinery that are used for advanced level laboratory works.
It is a matter of great sorrow for me that I did not get any reply from such a marvelous college. However, I also applied to a college in Canada and they are very much interested in offering me admission with a scholarship. They have given me a deadline until 30th November to confirm my admission.
At this stage, I really need to know your decision regarding my application so that I can get admitted to a college without losing any semester. Please consider my situation and help me out.
Sincerely yours,
Shamema Afroj Sharna
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, look, really, regarding, so, well, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 937.175257732 159% => OK
No of words: 302.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92052980132 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89257695616 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 290.88556701 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0450797738 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4117647059 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64705882353 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189862697204 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546161571295 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604615278987 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925198649018 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701790458504 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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