You have planned to study in Australia. You have sent a letter to a college, but you have not received a reply from the college. Write a letter to the college principal. In your letter,
- you should give details of the course that you wished to do,
- say why do you choose to study at the college,
- say why you need the reply soon.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to enquire about the ‘Diploma in Robotics’ course that your college is offering. I wrote a letter earlier for last summer intake but did not get any reply.
I wish to join the ‘Diploma in Robotics’ at your college. Robotics will be the future and learning this will be exciting. Also, the current job trend is on AI and robotics, this will be prevalent throughout. I would like to know when will be the next intake and like to know more about the fees and scholarship possibilities. I would also like to know if there is any pre-requisite for this course, so I can prepare myself to join the course.
I have seen many colleges offering the same course, but all of them are of one-year duration. Meanwhile, your college offers 15 months duration with internship opportunities. Moreover, I admire the faculties and infrastructure of the campus. Even, the placement cell is active and is one of the best. So, for the all above mentioned above reason, your college is my first option for doing the course.
It would be very kind if you could reply soon so that I can arrange an alternative study option if I cannot get through your college.
I hope a prompt reply from your side.
Yours Sincerely
Rahul
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...can prepare myself to join the course. I have seen many colleges offering the sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66968325792 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69502505553 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7349963397 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181223347407 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051023810144 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510884342879 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998117749233 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050972608183 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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