A large amount of advertisements nowadays are now targetted on children. Many people say this has negative effects on children and
should therefore be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Advertisements are ubiquitous nowadays, especially the ones that are targeting the children as these industries know that children are vulnerable. Many are worried about this phenomenon. However, we cannot ban advertisement as they serve many useful purposes as well.
Admittedly, in the toy industries, there should be some restriction on excess access to such advertisements, because children cannot distinguish between what they want and beneficial. They will get allured to the aesthetics and design and swayed by such misleading pieces of information. Later on, children will pester for the product they admire, and this can upset the budget of the family. Even the advertisement for fast foods is bad for children. They cannot understand the side effects of such food as these foods can be detrimental to their health, causing disease like obesity. The advertisements on these junk foods are aesthetically appealing and yummy, but in reality, the content on that food chemical which can exacerbate the health. Adding on, the children try to imitate the stunts performed in some advertisements which can turn disastrous sometimes.
On the other hand, advertisement plays a vital role in the consumer industry. People won’t be able to buy or get to know every new product launched in electronics and many others. In this way, advertising become useful for manufacturers and consumers. Additionally, it fuels advertising industries and creates many jobs for people. In this aspect, the advertising industry becomes the backbone of many economies in the world.
Furthermore, advertisement touches on social issues. For example, when some celebrity tells of bringing their children for pulse polio immunization, people will listen. Similarly, when cricketer Rahul Dravid, about the side effects of smoking, people will at least try to avoid their lousy habit. Also, the advertisement around the world helps people to understand the culture of a different location.
To conclude, it is imperative that regulations must be imposed on advertiser who target children or who make false claims. However, advertisements are indispensable in this competitive market and produce much positive effect than negative. Hence, we should not ban advertisements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...uce much positive effect than negative. Hence we should not ban the advertisements. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, similarly, so, well, at least, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53468208092 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13035668063 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56936416185 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.346729024 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0454545455 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77272727273 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279703647085 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830107638938 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404252613266 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168313414148 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440123787819 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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