Write a letter to a college Principal, where you attended one-day computer course and are unhappy about the way it was conducted. Explain the type of course, what happened and what can be done that it never happen again
Dear Sir,
I recently attended a one-day “ROS BASICS” course organized by your college. I am writing this to show the dismay towards how the course was conducted.
I enrolled in this course after reading about it on an online platform. I am keen to learn robotics and hence the ROS program which run the robots. Even I’m a post-graduate in Mechanical Engineering; I thought robotics and automation is future Industry, and by understanding and learning would help me in career prospects, so I joined the course. But, I am sorry to say that even after completing the course; I feel I gained nothing. You enrolled 20 people for the course and only provided five systems and one instructor. We hardly get 10 minutes for hands-on work, and one to one interaction with the instructor was relatively low.
After charging a lump sum for the course and not providing value for the money spent, I got dissatisfied and felt distressed. It is my humble request to have a check in the number of participants or by adding more instructors or systems. So you can alleviate the problem in future. I would be grateful if you can allow to me attend another session at without charging extra fees.
I am hoping to hear from you soon on this matter! You can contact me on this number 894486, in case you need any further clarification.
Yours faithfully
Rahul
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...reading about it on an online platform. I am keen to learn robotics and hence the...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...stems. So you can alleviate the problem in future. I would be grateful if you can allow t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...atter! You can contact me on this number 894486, in case you need any further cla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74152542373 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81879681496 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639830508475 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.006968049 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9285714286 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8571428571 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180985086576 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598301466452 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504504054586 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117751005268 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489723074947 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.