Nowadays, many families have both parents working. Some working parents believe, other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give Your own opinion.
It is irrefutable that in this era both parents have to work to meet their daily needs, as a result, children have to be either raised by grandparents or child-care centres. This essay intends to explain both views. I, however, believe that children who got raised by grandparents are more responsive and humane than the kids from the child-care centre.
To begin with, nowadays many parents run in a tight schedule and they don’t get enough time to spend with their children. As a result, they send the children over to the child-care centre. These institutes not only make them social but also help them with the pre-schooling as well. This will help the child to get a foundation to the schooling system.
On the contrary, parents used to leave their children with their grandparents for ‘positive’ reasons, such as ‘caring environment’ rather than simply because they can’t afford child care. As the relationship between grandparent to a grandchild is far deeper than anything in this world, grandparents usually love their grandkids to their life and can be considered as a symbiotic relationship. This not only makes them vibrant and energetic but also help to reduce stress, depression and loneliness which are very common at the later stage of life, hence it is a win-win situation for both.
To my mind, the care provided by the grandparents outweighs the attention given by the child-care centre. The child care centres are focussing only on the remuneration rather the child well-being, it’s now a business competition among the peer group. But the love and care given by a grandparent cannot be equalled.
To sum up, although the child care centre has its advantages, the care provided by their grandparents are endless.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07266435986 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88818121621 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553633217993 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3896800088 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260442954127 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984057496767 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701380455984 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160604463508 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502299490226 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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