The number of TV programs is growing day by day Some people say it is good as it gives people more choices while others say it affects the quality of TV programs Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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The number of TV programs is growing day by day. Some people say it is good as it gives people more choices, while others say it affects the quality of TV programs. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Television has become the most prevalent of all media, and there is no doubt that the number of TV programs has also grown by leaps and bounds in the last two decades. Some individuals opine that this gives us a plethora of choices, whereas others believe that this is leading to a deterioration of the quality of TV programs. This essay intends to look into both perspectives. I, however, side with the latter view.
Too many TV programs will give a lot of choices for the people. For instance, if we look at the number of daily soaps, there are quite a few running on many different channels and people can select any one or two according to their taste. Even reality shows related to music, dance, adventure and many other things are also far too many and people watch whichever they are interested in.
Secondly, some reality shows have allowed the common man with talent to come forward and show his talent to the world. To exemplify, in recent years, singing contest programs such as ‘Indian Idol’ and ‘Star Singer’ has uncovered many talented singers. This is good practice for Indian TV.
On the other hand, it is indubitable that there are too many such talent shows on television, which are similar in concept as well as the content. Fierce competition between satellite channels for audience ratings has led to a large number of copycat programs. The excessive production of such programs that are quite similar to each other is a huge waste of resource and audience time. Also, these similar programs bereft from originality and creativity.
Furthermore, too many programs have resulted in choice overload. It is virtually impossible to keep up with everything worth watching, and at some point, viewers need to decide what they have to watch and what they can ignore. Even the popular programs may not always be on the top lists as the quality declines.
To sum up, even though there are choices because of an abundance of TV programs, an excess of TV programs is definitely not good. We need fewer, quality programs, which make our leisure time worthwhile.

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Average: 8.7 (12 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 152, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...soaps, there are quite a few running on many different channels and people can select any one ...
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Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'anyone'?
Suggestion: anyone
...ifferent channels and people can select any one or two according to their taste. Even r...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...hannels for audience ratings has led to a large number of copycat programs. The excessive product...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8431372549 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53990428537 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565826330532 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2493246916 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245781910986 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735648487431 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553736719783 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120580258625 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411880194489 0.056905535591 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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