In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion on this?
In many parts of the US, children are not allowed to roam at night without parents supervision due to the imposition of a “curfew”. In my opinion, this step devoid them of their fundamental human right to move out freely, and this could hinder their confidence during adulthood.
To begin with, it is a fundamental right to human to wander around, which is guaranteed by the constitution of the US. Restricting young generation from going out is like stripping them from their fundamental right. Of course, being out at night impose many threats to the teens, but preventing them from going out is not a viable solution. Instead, teachers and parents can educate them and make aware of the vicious crimes such as robbery, rape, kidnapping and many others that are prevalent during night hours. When the children are equipped with the knowledge and technology, they will be able to safeguard themselves and can safely roam at any time of the day or night.
Additionally, moving out only with parents outside during late hours are not a feasible solution, as many child’s parents or caretakers work late hours. For instance, teenage children of nurses, doctors and many other frontline workers are alone at night. If these children want to go out at night, it would be not easy to find an adult to accompany them. It can put them in trouble if they have some urgent errand to run or if they have to attend some night parties. These children will be reluctant to move out in any case of emergency because of the fear.
To recapitulate, in my opinion, children should be allowed to move out at night. They should be empowered with knowledge and technology so they can safeguard themselves. This not only makes them independent and confident but also give them the freedom to make their own choice in life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79233226837 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63666361503 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520766773163 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.501919125 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282320770016 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10200632187 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671349842258 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179305074058 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166695033182 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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