ln many countries, the government spends a large amount of money on improving internet access. why is it happening? Do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?
Nowadays, the internet provides a vital role in a person’s life. It becomes a prerequisite for promoting a nation’s economy. No wonder, many governments are investing a lot in making internet available free to their citizens. This essay intends to analyze the reason behind this phenomenon. I believe that governments are being wise about doing this expenditure.
The main reason, why governments are spending on internet access is that they realize that it is not an expenditure but an investment, while it will return to them in the form of taxes. Uninterrupted and efficient internet will help them to expand their business globally, as they can communicate with international clients, import products and get vital international information. This will overall boost the country’s economy.
Secondly, the Internet acts as a social leveller. By providing internet access to the deprived and poor section of the society, the government can bring them to the mainstream and can ensure their participation in the growth and development of the country. The Internet empowers people. By giving access to vital information, it can make people aware of their rights. It provides vibrant opportunities for people living in remote areas. The Internet provides a countless number of jobs directly or indirectly, allowing people to work remotely and freelancing. Perhaps, no other inventions have had made such a tremendous impact on the life of people for the past two decades.
I believe that the governments, which are spending on free internet access, have the foresight that it is imperative spending. The Internet is a whole universe in its own. It can be used in many ways. Developed countries and intelligent people use this as a way which makes their life better and faster, by using services like technology, education and health care. For instance, nowadays we can see the use of Social Media, people are using it to share their opinion, which will help the government and organization to make a better decision. So free and fast internet is an absolute must for democracy and economy.
To conclude, there is much reason why some governments are spending on providing free internet to its people, and I consider it as a judicious expenditure with far-reaching positive consequences.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22162162162 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02064481625 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521621621622 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.0991600343 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8181818182 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203307494492 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617558277476 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046243477782 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122948623225 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0241889196523 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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