Inform the bank manager in a letter about the fact that you cannot go to an agreed meeting. You should cover the following: - inform and apologize - describe the reason for your absence - propose a new time
Dear Sir,
I have a meeting regarding a home loan fixed with you on 31st October 2020. Unfortunately, I shall not be able to make it on that day. I apologies for the inconvenience caused because of this.
Due to this pandemic, even I faced a setback and is at the verge of losing the job. I have tried many other companies, and I managed to get to through some online interview. Today, I got information from one of the companies stating that I should reach their corporate office for the final face-to-face interview. It is happening in Bangalore, and I have to leave one week before the interview there to set myself up.
I would be grateful if you could reschedule our meeting in the last week of October. You can call me on 8888888 to inform me of the new date, or alternatively, you can mail me at krishnan@yahoo.com.
Once again I apologies for the inconvenience and thank you for your kind consideration.
Yours faithfully
Rahul
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: OR_ALTERNATIVELY[1]
Message: Use simply 'or'.
Suggestion: or
...n 8888888 to inform me of the new date, or alternatively, you can mail me at krishnan@yahoo.com....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.625 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10117905125 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2196017079 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6363636364 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223612400464 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700495804823 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583175377512 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13148771016 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503885982974 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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