Imagine you are going to an English speaking country; write to a rental agency,
- the type of house you want.
- its size.
- the surroundings.
Dear Sir,
I’m Rahul Krishnan, from Kerala, India. I am moving out to Canada with my family for the next two years. I want to rent out an apartment for the next couple of years.
Myself, wife and my parents will accompany to the new place. So, I would like to have a two-bedroom apartment, preferably on the ground floor. It would be nice if the whole room furniture like bed, sofa and kitchen items like refrigerator, oven and many others are there. Perhaps, it should be pretty spacious, and I’m ready to shell out around $1000 for the home.
The apartment should be close to some shopping centres and should have a park in the neighbourhood as we can stroll around the park to unwind from the stress after work. Moreover, we would be happy if facilities like hospitals are nearby. Last but not least, the public transportation facility should be there as I don’t want to buy a car for the two next years.
Please let me know if you find suitable accommodation for me. If you have any queries, please feel free to contact me on 84445. Alternatively, you can mail me at krijs@yahoo.com.
Yours faithfully
Rahul
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.615 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69387731718 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8815672118 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9285714286 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0675007393828 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250884921317 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357486032508 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0418332845327 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423140253915 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.