More and more people are using the internet to do their tasks rather than doing in person. (e.g. banking, shopping, hotel booking etc. ). Do
the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
The Internet has become an indispensable part of human life, and it is difficult to think of a world without the internet. It enables us to do things that only a few years ago would have been unthinkable and reaches every facet of our lives. As a result, daily tasks and business transactions can be performed without meeting people, in person. This practice certainly has more positive effects on the individual and society as a whole.
It is indubitable that with the advent of technology, modern devices and tools for communications such as telephone, fax machines, computers and many others have bought tremendous convenience and efficiency to both life and work. The boom and acceptance of people on e-commerce which includes e-banking and e-shopping have made life easier and convenient than ever before. Now people can stay home comfortably, looking on the internet where a vast ocean of information is available to find what they need, and even compare the prices at various websites and purchase via online banking which suits them. All this can be done without much effort like reading reference, newspapers and so on. As a result, they have more time to socialize with the family, pursue hobbies and interests, which are all imperative parts of quality life.
The trend of doing business by telecommunication equally benefits the whole society because business can be done more efficiently and effectively at a much lower cost. An extra benefit is that more natural resources can be saved. To exemplify, during the corona pandemic most of the companies have given work from home option to the employee, according to the research most companies are planning to extend in future as they are cost-cutting a lot in energy source as they no longer need buildings to run business. Additionally, environment survey states that pollution reduced drastically by 75 per cent due to less number of vehicles on the road.
Furthermore, small businesses have almost the same opportunities to advertise and promote their products and services online to compete with the larger ones without much effort and resource, which makes the whole world fairer.
On the downside, there is an increasing concern about the loss of direct human contact as a result of which there is an impoverishment of people’s emotional lives, as well as the loss of social cohesion. Moreover, the privacy of individuals can suffer. So, proper steps have to be taken to protect the public against cybercrime and cyber-terrorism.
To sum up, performing everyday tasks and business transactions utilizing telecommunications benefits the individual and the society enormously. There is simply no going back.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2249.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 434.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18202764977 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97867098454 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.1073890272 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.368421053 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8421052632 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146416859577 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404992298897 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396278129348 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634190712571 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499293589928 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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