An Australian company offers money to foreign students to study in Australia. Write a letter to the company.
- Introduce yourself
- Say what do you want to study
- How the money will help you.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this to apply for the scholarship program your company offers to study in Australia to overseas students.
I am Rahul Krishnan, and I live in India. Recently, I came across an article on BBC News, where it was mentioned that your company offers financial help to students for further studies. I have confirmed the same on your organisation’s website.
I have completed under-graduation in Mechanical Engineering. Due to financial constraints, it is quite difficult for me to pursue a masters degree in a foreign university. The monetary help provided by you is enough to do post-graduation in Robotics. As this is an emerging field, and I would be happy to help the people around with technology.
The scholarship would help me to cover my tuition fees, however, for my other expenses, I will do a part-time job. Moreover, it will ease some burden off my parent's shoulders. After earning this degree, I would be able to work more with NGO’s to help people to get adapt to modern technologies.
I am enclosing my resume and reference for your kind perusal. My contact number is 248866 if you have anything to clarify from me.
I am looking forwards to a positive response.
Yours Sincerely,
RK
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89473684211 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07975679274 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622009569378 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9198447241 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175074309276 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474032902804 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575912347202 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851007648878 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624880128144 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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