Write a letter of recommendation for a friend who submitted his resume to a tourist office

Essay topics:

Write a letter of recommendation for a friend who submitted his resume to a tourist office.

Dear Jack,
I am writing to commend to your attention, a most extraordinary young man for the post of a senior tour guide. He has applied to your company. Ram has worked as a senior officer in Kerala tourism for the past five years. During his tenure, he has consistently excelled in whatever things he has to do. He has always had a good rapport with the clients.
Ram has extensive knowledge of the tourism business and first-rate skill in dealing with the customers. I have found him wholly reliable and enthusiastic in performing whatever he is asked to do.
I have been working with him for the past two years. Within, a short period, we become intimate friends. I will personally be sorry when he moves on, but I am confident that he can excel where ever he goes and would an excellent addition to the place. I enthusiastically recommend him.
Yours Sincerely
Rahul

Votes
Average: 4.4 (3 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, thus, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67741935484 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78150574214 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658064516129 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9808509006 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4166666667 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9166666667 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828240627957 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0322849359965 0.0766984524023 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412243420318 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0514791531862 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447946174092 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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