Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but other people claim that it is the individual's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Education and healthcare are the basic necessity and is among the primary concern of human being. There is a lot of argument around who need to pay for these elementary facilities either, government or individual. Some are in opine that the government should provide and support the basic amenities while others argue it should be taken care of by an individual. This essay intends to discuss both perspectives and, in my opinion, the government should pay for basic education and healthcare.
It is irrefutable that it is the government's responsibility to provide facilities like medical and education accessible to everyone. It is a known fact that the country's economy is on the hands of educated people who are healthy as well. After all the people pay tax to the government and they are entitled to get something in return. Private schools and private hospitals can be used by those who want and can afford, but public hospitals and education centres must be there always.
On the other side, the individual should be responsible for advanced health treatments. As those treatments are expensive and it would be a burden for the government. So, people should not depend on the government; instead, they can take medical insurance or save some other way with keeping tomorrow in mind. Even, education would benefit an individual more than a country; hence it should be from personal pocket.
It is also a fact that there are societies which lacks these necessary facilities due to poverty. The government should have some policies to iterate the socio-economic status and provide basic health facilities free for them. In the case of education, the government can give interest-free loans to those deserving students who can not afford their education.
To sum up, it can be reiterated that basic health and education should be paid off by the government, while the advanced use of facilities can be taken from an individual pocket.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...care. It is irrefutable that it is the governments responsibility to provide facilities li...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...als and education centres must be there always. On the other side, the individual sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, well, while, after all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05919003115 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85083326728 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504672897196 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0605514859 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.5 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330371978524 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110551811489 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748008932136 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173531312809 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720169799695 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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