Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance ore important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Success means a different thing for different people, it completely depends on their perspective. Therefore, success by “money + look” or “determination + hard work” is a hot topic to debate. This essay intends to explain both views. I personally inclined in favour of the latter, as I strongly believe perseverance and hard work is necessary to get succeed. It is unwise to give credit solely to the money and look.
Determination and hard work is an important prerequisite for success. First of all, the determination will give an impetus to set a goal. For example, MK Gandhi who strived to make India independent from British rule. His sole determination with proper agenda and goals helped him to get succeed.
However, not only determination work alone. But also, it has to be followed up with hard and continuous work otherwise it will be just a waste. It has been well said that “Genius is one per cent inspiration and 99 per cent, perspiration”. Take the example of Jack Ma who is a successful businessman, he has a strong determination and put a lot of sweat and toil in his business to get it to the top of the world. Money and look cannot sell any product.
Those who advocate the side which money and look can bring up success believe that good look will shoot up the confidence and in turn, they can bring up success. This is mostly in for people who chose acting as his profession. They are also in opine that entrepreneur can be successful only when they have the capital to invest in. They have faith in the dictum that money multiplies money.
To sum up, the belief that money and look can alone bring up success is unpractical. In order to be successful in life, one has to be very determined and put a lot of effort to make that happen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to act'.
Suggestion: to act
... This is mostly in for people who chose acting as his profession. They are also in op...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65923566879 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84999058292 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4102739329 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.15 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211435713748 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067660924802 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520275463401 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121805238262 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527154782207 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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