some people think that the government should make laws regarding nutritlion and healthy lifestyle, white others think that it is a matter of
personal choice and personal responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The modern sedentary lifestyle and ease of availability of junk food are leading to many diseases such as obesity, diabetes and hypertension, which are eating away the budget of many governments. That is perhaps why many people are in the opine that the government should make laws to regulate access to junk food and promote a healthy diet. However, others say there shouldn’t be any regulation or control over what they eat or how they live. This essay intends to analyze both views.
Supporters of the government role in regulating the lifestyle and our lives say that many people are not aware of the food that they eat. People will get easily swayed by the availability of cheap and junk food which bereft essential nutrition. This increase the risk of disease, and the government should implement a hefty tax on such food and promotes healthy food at subsidized rates.
Moreover, the government can take “carrot” and “stick” policy, where the carrot policy is the incentive given to people who do exercise and stick is the punishment. For instance, The government in Mexico is providing free ride in suburban train for people who do ten squats infront of the machine. Even the government of India is providing a scheme to mid-day meal to the schools, where the pupil are served with highly nutritious food, so they don’t suffer malnutrition.
On the other hand, some believe the onus of having a healthy lifestyle solely a decision of an individual. They say that the government cannot and should not force anybody to follow a healthy diet or exercise. It’s the people right to take whatever they like to eat or the lifestyle they want to follow. The government should just aware the people about the dangers of an unhealthy lifestyle, and leave it on the people to do what they wish. The government can provide some facilities like gym and sports centres at an affordable rate so that people can get motivated to go there very often. But there should not be any compulsion to do or follow the practice.
To conclude, the government intervention is needed to make a healthy choice to the people and to alert them about the sinful lifestyle and eating habits. People should also follow the advice of government and be cautious about what they eat and how they exercise.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...t what they eat and how they exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86224489796 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6339369101 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487244897959 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.9 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3979681893 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.888888889 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187172246 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694918072146 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448897951541 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115040322451 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386996948243 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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