Some people believe that success in life depends on hard work and determination, while others believe that other factors like money and personal appearance are important.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Certain experts consider that working harder and with determination lead them to success, whereas others find wealth and personal look to be pivotal. This essay with first discuss the reasons for the former view, secondly a detailed analysis of the latter view with which I agree, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
To begin with, the main reason behind the former view is development of confidence by being determinate and working diligently. As continuous involvement of any individual in the task with enthusiasm has resulted into building up of experience, the targeted job will be accomplished easily. Moreover, it would improve the humans mental capabilities. Since thoughts are the real meal of brain, firm determination of the any task would increase the capacity to think and achieve the goal. For instance, Mahatma Gandhi had helped Indian to achieve freedom only because of his firm determination and persistent work.
However, few people including me are against it because power of money and physical appearance is crucial for success. This is because, since cash is the intrinsic requirement of all, it is evident to bow down to the affluent person to satisfy the basic need of food, cloth and house to stay. In addition to this, a human being has been observed being surrendered to the appealing look of the person. For example, many interviewers are attracted to charming ladies and handsome man and select them even with low suitability of job profile.
In conclusion, although particular individuals are able to jump the mark of success with rigorous working pattern and better decision power, I firmly believe wealth and good looks being the fundamental need and human instinct to surrender, it would be the cause to hit the goal.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it would be the cause to hit the goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18531468531 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79511285561 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8101952973 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119387015267 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412838108988 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419769218763 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745769609304 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330583265568 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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