Your friend will be staying at your home, but you can’t be there. Write a letter in which you explain: - How the keys will get to him/her - How to use the electrical appliances - Recommend some interesting places to visit
Dear Ram,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am so happy to hear that you are coming to visit here on a week’s holiday. Unfortunately, I won’t be available as I have to fly to Delhi for a business meeting.
I have to leave on the 21st of November as a few clients are coming from the USA. There is an auto expo happening there in Delhi which they are coming to see and requested me to show my company’s product there only. I shall be leaving the key with my colleague who is living next door. You will find everything you need inside. The fridge is stacked with eatable, and WIFI is available in the room and password is pasted on a paper near the TV, even there’s a cable connection if you wished to watch a movie or news. If you have any doubt regarding the use of an electrical appliance, you may ask Mr Rohit, and he is accommodating.
There are many historical places like forts and temples within 5 Kms; also you can enjoy the beautiful sunset at the beach. What more to say, there a restaurant named Paragon, which is famous for its kind of traditional foods served. You can ask Rohit to accompany you.
I hope you will have an excellent time. Once again, I apologies for not being there to give to a company.
Yours lovingly
Rahul
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, regarding, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4948727249 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.023714391 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46666666667 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264464341994 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849870831083 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545640776584 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14690889774 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122107090811 0.0580467560999 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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