Write a letter to your friend who asked you to give some suggestion to his son is coming to your country. Tell him which city he should go to, how he can get a job, and how he can make friends.
Dear Arjun,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant energy and the best of the spirits. It was a pleasant surprise for me that your son is coming to my country, India with “Work Visa”. It was an honour that you enquired with me and I’m glad to guide him.
As far as I know, Delhi is one of the vibrant city which is also known as the technical capital, will provide a lot of opportunities for the fresher’s. As you know very well my brother, Ramu is also there in Delhi. He works as a Software Engineer in one of the renowned company. He stays there as a paying guest in sector 34 which is near to a metro station. Now the whole city is well connected with metro and is the main way of commuting. If your son Raju choose to stay with him, he can guide him to find the best place to stay with.
Many opportunities are plying around the cities, even there are agencies which help him to get in touch with the companies. Normally, one doesn’t need to wait long as far as he met the qualities or skills. Making friends in Delhi is not a big deal, many of the hangouts in the evening. Even my brother is also there to care.
Hope to see Raju soon!
Yours lovingly
RAHUL
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.19736842105 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27185785295 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570175438596 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5953471312 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.3571428571 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2857142857 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227986170304 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679491964402 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458192772091 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102285383575 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667141572939 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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