You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letterDescribe the problemSay how long it has been a problemExplain what action you would like the neighbour to take

Essay topics:

You have a problem with a neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter

Describe the problem
Say how long it has been a problem
Explain what action you would like the neighbour to take

Dear XYZ,
I am writing this letter to let you know about the inconvenience, I am facing due the load noise coming from your flat. It seems you are renovating your kitchen.
In the evening we hear a lot of hammering and drilling noise. We are thinking that this problem will be for one week, so I was ignoring it. But, now more than ten days have passed and the amount of noise is increasing day by day. The deafening sound of hammer and drill machine are destroying our evening. It has become impossible for me and my family to do anything in the evening. Kids have their exam on next week.
I understand that your full-time work does not permit you to call a worker during the day-time. I would you recommend that you contact a professional builder that and take some day off from your work. Uncertainly, the experienced person will be more efficient.
If you need any help for the assistance for a professional worker, I can help you.
Hopping you will take any prompt action for this situation.
Best Regards,
Kirti

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing. Kids have their exam on next week. I understand that your full-time work do...
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Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or this situation. Best Regards, Kirti
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56756756757 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56397472664 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67027027027 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9303068515 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.3571428571 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2142857143 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200366874868 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649537347313 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709517952924 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120151421744 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549015463609 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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