You have received a bill from a mobile phone company for international call charges relating to a time
when you did not use your phone for international call. Write a letter to company
Complaining about this Giving your reasons Asking for bill to be changed
Dear Sir, Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the discrepancy found in my recent received mobile bill with regards to international call charge.
I been using your mobile company service provider sim number 91-978452345 since last 2 years and haven't faced any issues until last month.
But, I was so surprised to notice that, the last received bill charged around 1500 rupees for an International call with call time updated as 24 th Jan,2019 5:15 pm.
The same bill generation is contradicting to me as, I would certain believe that I haven't made any International call on above mentioned date and time.
Besides that , I believe that my current Sim is yet to be activated for International call facility.
Hence, I kindly request you to re check on same , validate it and sent me the revised bill after exempting from International call charges.
I hope to have you informed sufficiently and look forward in receiving updated bill promptly.
Please don't hesitate to reach me for any things if required.
Your`s sincerely,
Ramesh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'was', 'were'?
Suggestion: was; were
...ards to international call charge. I been using your mobile company service provi...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...ber 91-978452345 since last 2 years and havent faced any issues until last month. ...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...o me as, I would certain believe that I havent made any International call on above me...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mentioned date and time. Besides that , I believe that my current Sim is yet to...
^^
Line 13, column 48, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...I kindly request you to re check on same , validate it and sent me the revised bil...
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Line 17, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...eiving updated bill promptly. Please dont hesitate to reach me for any things if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17142857143 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86784246645 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685714285714 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6909828782 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.555555556 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399509281307 0.216113520407 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142211559044 0.0766984524023 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562956647743 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146374691441 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588585368571 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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