Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need.
Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Advertisements across all social medias are becoming increasingly popular day by day. However some people discuss that, advertisements motivates us to purchase things although we are not dependent on it while, other people discuss that, advertisement is essential for us to purchase new products in order to increase our life style standard.
In this essay, I will discuss why advertisements are really imperative to our daily life style and give reasons/evidence on same.
To begin with, Advertisements have grown to greater extends in last two decades due to social medias like television, newspaper, posters, face books, twitter, you tube, Google etc. We can see the advertisements in our daily life style and get knowledge on various products we used in our daily life style. It became inevitable in our daily life. The life style certainly have improved on the same. The only way, we know about new products and its benefits are from its advertisement and reviews of same products. Also there are many benefits like discounts, cashback's which are explicitly published or being broadcasted via social medias as part of advertisements.
Now, I would like to substantiate on why advertisement influenced in my life and why it's so essential. I don't own any car for my family so, I need to rely on OLA`s, Uber`s cab facilities. Using various advertisements like newspaper or tv, I used to get offer details for rental outstation travel. This have helped me to significantly reduce my expenses as I used to avail cab facilities often. The most boost for me is through one of advertisement in paytm which I came to know about firt time flight travel cashback.With which, I took my Family to my home town in convenient cheap fare.
Besides, this all the products in flipkart, amazon are being advertised to educate the society in its new features and benefits.Eventually customer know the information to buy based on their requirements
In conclusion, Mostly, all the daily products which we use in our daily life style are part of advertisement.Besides that, people are now smarter enough to choose what is good and what is bad quality items. So, I am certain that, in future the advertisements are going to play crucial role in our life style standardization.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, really, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09066666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27229881819 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541333333333 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.1512469432 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.3125 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4375 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243952138519 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770871963001 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564522173848 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129376715957 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462166537604 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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