You recently took a part-time job working for a local company. After a few weeks, you realised there were some problems with the job.
Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter:
- explain why you took the job
- describe the problems that you experienced
- suggest what could be done about them
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to you, with regards to the current issues that I have been facing since last 2 weeks especially during weekends. As you aware of my things,currently I am pursuing PG course in Austin University. So, In order to help me out my personal conveyance, I had accepted an offer to work as a part-time employee in this company on last Month.
However, I am facing issues in supporting during weekends owing to extended overnight support.For Last 2 weekends ,I was managed to reach home after midnight. Apparently, my next days ended in tiresome. Besides this, for recent quite days, I was also not provided with free dinner as agreed for this part-time job. This further increases my hunger and getting spoiled my health.
I strongly agree with the fact, this company is in development mode and expect more customers during weekends. But, I would kindly request you expedite the steps to reduce my working mode as its part-time. Also encourage the supervising staff to provide my dinner food regularly. It would be great if you could arrange one more part-time employee to cater to huge Customer`s crowd if possible.
I hope to have you informed sufficiently and look forward on hearing from you promptly to discuss on same and sort out my personal issues.Thanks for your understanding on me
Yours sincerely
Ramesh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , currently
...ring weekends. As you aware of my things,currently I am pursuing PG course in Austin Unive...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...nds owing to extended overnight support.For Last 2 weekends ,I was managed to reach...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed overnight support.For Last 2 weekends ,I was managed to reach home after midnig...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hunger and getting spoiled my health. I strongly agree with the fact, this com...
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Line 7, column 213, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'encourages'.
Suggestion: encourages
... my working mode as its part-time. Also encourage the supervising staff to provide my din...
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Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thanks
...on same and sort out my personal issues.Thanks for your understanding on me Yours s...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r understanding on me Yours sincerely Ramesh
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01746724891 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90661792414 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646288209607 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6240249811 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195294665449 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654583737827 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532695128841 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116246035068 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00674266832832 0.0580467560999 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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