You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:explain why you are writingexpress concern about the

Essay topics:

You have received a letter from your bank, asking you to acknowledge receipt of a new bank card. However, the card was missing from the envelope.
Write a letter to the bank's head office. In your letter:
explain why you are writing
express concern about the missing card
ask them what they intend to do

Dear Sir,
Lately, I received a communication from Bank to send the acknowledge receipt of new bank card. I am writing this letter to inform that courier which I received for new bank card did not have a bank card and only card manuals were in the packet.
This saving account was opened last week through my corporate as next month onward monthly salary will be credited in this account. I appreciate your fast response to get couriered the bank card within a week but efforts went futile as bank card is missing. Though I received the pin number in separate courier, there are still chances that card could be misused if reached to wrong person. Particularly with Internet based transaction, only card no and three digit printed on card are required to complete the shopping.
Hence, I request you not only block the card but also to investigate the matter how did card missing from envelop. This seems to be gross violation to me and overall may have financial repercussion. I have already communicated to bank emergency department about this incident. In the meanwhile, I would also request you to issue a new card so that could start the transactions with bank.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Jana

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Lately, I received a communication from ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eived a communication from Bank to send the acknowledge receipt of new bank card. I am writing ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...h Internet based transaction, only card no and three digit printed on card are req...
^^
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'digit' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'digits'.
Suggestion: digits
...sed transaction, only card no and three digit printed on card are required to complet...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81775700935 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63057550825 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2823312337 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9166666667 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412029892392 0.216113520407 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146368128494 0.0766984524023 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983499312332 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244880330305 0.12726935374 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100640945522 0.0580467560999 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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