You recently bought some food at the supermarket, but, when you go home , you found that the food was in bad condition. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter,
explain what happened to you , give details of the day and time of purchase.
ask the manager he/she intends to do about your experience.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you about condition of brown bread post purchase which I bought from your local station store Leeds. I am regular customer of your store and shop weekly mostly on weekends. Last Saturday i.e. 13th April’18, I did the general shopping which included breads, vegetables, fruits and some CD’s of Bryan Adams around noon and when I returned home and unpacked the items, I found that breads are wet inside the packet. Initially, I felt that some items spilled over the bread which caused it wet but I checked all items and nothing leaked on it. It appears that some liquid feel probably a juice fell on the bread and might have been packed by your staff in same condition.
Since, I am not able to use the bread, I want to return the item which should be picked by your staff from my home as I can’t come to supermarket during weekdays. Furthermore, I am also interested to know the actions you are likely to take for avoiding such kind of conditions in future.
I am looking forward to listen from you.
Yours Sincerely
Ashish Purwar
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you about conditi...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome CD's of Bryan Adams around noon and when I returned home and unpacked th...
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Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ke for avoiding such kind of conditions in future. I am looking forward to listen from y...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to listening'.
Suggestion: to listening
...itions in future. I am looking forward to listen from you. Yours Sincerely Ashish Pu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64248704663 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44875531403 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673575129534 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1250706928 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1588287512 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658726228747 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390566857 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117819798618 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.011347568524 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.